Needs a little more.
Good start for a stick movie. Needed sound and a little more action though. Good luck
Needs a little more.
Good start for a stick movie. Needed sound and a little more action though. Good luck
A bit drawn out.
Though suspense was most likely your goal, it dragged out. It wasn't blam worthy though, pretty decent. However, I can't believe this had taken a year to complete.
reminds me of reading rainbow
I enjoy your style. You're a talented artist, but the story and the way it's presented is just a little too slow for my own liking. However, that doesn't mean it's not a good submission by any means.
Back from Japan, so watch yourself
Age 41, Male
English Teacher
UConn
Himeji, Japan
Joined on 1/1/05