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[Flush]

Not a bad start.

Work on making the motions a little more fluid as well as increasing the length of the story a little. Other than that, it's a good start.

Sp4ceman-Spiff responds:

Thanks. Yah I've thought of that already, but altho this was a class assignment, using the schools resources like memory cards and such, I was limited to only 150 stills. And the video had to be around 1 minute long.

[Half-Life 2 Ragdolls #2]

Creative.

That was pretty fun to watch. I like your ideas and they were presented well. Good job.

[(2005) Klay Swimming Pool]

I always enjoy a Knox original.

Pointless. Randomness. Trapezium. A Knox knows not the meaning of these words. Well done, these always gets a snicker out of me. Keep up the good work.
(and for any claymation artists that complain about being called on copying knox, maybe if you were more original with your claymation instead of blatantly copying the knox style it wouldn't be pointed out that you're obviously trying to copy his style. Originality is key)

[Zodd's defeat]

Could be improved.

It was a good use of pictures in a story line. And if you couldn't tell I'm a Berserk fan. Needed a bit more though. Too short and obscure for anyone who doesn't know what that was. Also the text did fade in and out too fast to read well. Though you did make this forever ago so I'm sure you've since improved on your methods.

[Ask Mr. Owl]

Excelent spoof.

Very well done. Bravo.

[Short Jap. Demon Clip]

Well done.

It's great despite it's small size. Something you don't hear too often right? Anyways, the only thing I would have changed was the shape of the beans, they look more like rocks. If I hadn't read the comments I wouldn't have known they were beans. Keep up the great work!

[H2O- ep. 1]

Original, but could use some work.

The story moved along a little bit slow, don't make such large pauses between the dialogue unless it's called for. also, the talking seemed to be a bit out of sync with the characters mouths and movements. Try and work on those things a bit more and it will be a great improvement. Good luck.

Josemaria responds:

Thanks. I fixed the sync problem. Watch it again if you like. thanks for the rest!

[the music is cool right 3]

Very nice.

Simplistic and enjoyable. Your art is quite good and you're doing it on the mere request of others, very generous. Keep up the good work. Oh, and just out of curiosity, do you just draw a small line in frame by frame manner and then just keep adding on in each successive frame or do you use masking to get the effect of watching it being drawn. Just wondering :).