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[madness madman]

FIGHT FIGHT

Keep going, you're on the right track but keep up the practice!!
Smooth out the animation, add sound fx, more content, you'll be well on your way to a substantial madness style animation! :D

Also, thanks for using my music in your flash!!!

killamasta03 responds:

Thanks for the review, I feel very honored to have you review my 3 yr old animation. :D I had taken a break from madness 'cuz of what ppl had said about my animation, but when I saw your review I began to practice and try a lot harder, Thank you for inspiring me! :D My newest animations are submitted on a account that was recently hacked, (sadly) Dragonslya. Anyway thank you! :D

[Halo Madness pt.1]

lol! don't listen to the haters bro

It took some balls to put this up. Yeah, it's not polished, hell, it's even a little painful to watch, but everyone starts somewhere right??

Ok, first point, learn all the basics first, I'll be glad to show you, as you know, and there are plenty of decent tutorials on this website. Always start with the basics.

Second off, hone your skills a bit. Instead of working with skribbling with the mouse might I suggest learning to manipulate the vectors in flash. It's alot easier for someone starting out, kind of like molding clay, and 9 times out of 10 it's going to look alot more polished. Hell, you've seen how popular you can get with just a vector circle and some tweens :P. (side note, use gradients wisely young one, otherwise it looks like someone puked on the screen).

Finally, don't get frustrated if something doesn't work out or if people come calling your stuff crap. No offense to the people on here, but a good majority have no idea how to do anything well either, except maybe give unconstructive criticism. So, learn, improve and THEN submit.

The 2 is for the potatos and being able to take peoples ill comments gracefully :D. I expect something I can give a 3 or better to next time!!

Wy2Slms-BoCS responds:

Thanks that makes me feel a little better. And my potatoes are polished like silver. lol

[BATTLE NEXUS trailer]

Hmm.

Do DC and Marvle characters even exist in the same universe? I don't think I agree that the flash is invincible by any means, I'm sure a simple trip wire would do the job. Super man on the other hand kind of has a bit of an invincibilty advantage unless someone has some of the green. Good work none the less, good luck.

Rez-Black responds:

Actually The Flash can run so fast he can go through objects and even back in time.

[Flush]

Not a bad start.

Work on making the motions a little more fluid as well as increasing the length of the story a little. Other than that, it's a good start.

Sp4ceman-Spiff responds:

Thanks. Yah I've thought of that already, but altho this was a class assignment, using the schools resources like memory cards and such, I was limited to only 150 stills. And the video had to be around 1 minute long.

[H2O- ep. 1]

Original, but could use some work.

The story moved along a little bit slow, don't make such large pauses between the dialogue unless it's called for. also, the talking seemed to be a bit out of sync with the characters mouths and movements. Try and work on those things a bit more and it will be a great improvement. Good luck.

Josemaria responds:

Thanks. I fixed the sync problem. Watch it again if you like. thanks for the rest!

[CnC - Ether Medal 1]

Good start to something.

This looks to be a good start. I'm sure it will be an interesting movie when there is more added to it. Have at it!

Renvan responds:

Heh - some day, I might get round to improving upon this but, for now, it's as "done" as it's getting - it's actually comic number 150 of an ongoing series, but the host I use doesn't support .swf uploads direct onto their site, so I uploaded it here and linked from my site.

[Crono Vs Frog]

Not a bad start.

Not a bad start. I'm glad you kept your dialogue decent and not childish. It's a real plus especially after having to see so much ridiculous text in many other flashes. Keep it up and good luck.

Shadow-4102 responds:

Heheh i see u think text is boring to read to.. =)

[Bounty Hunt]

Not bad.

Along the lines of Sprite movies it wasn't too bad, despite me not being a big fan of them. The only thing that this needed improvement on was that the ending was too abrupt. A little dialogue before the end credits would have been good.

KHCloudStrife responds:

I'll keep that in mind and add some dialouge in the end.

[Cool Things 045]

Hmm.

Should have stuck with the tank. I'm surprised that that 5 seconds of tank was enough to apease everyone.

AubergineLock responds:

yep, me too

[Black 'n' White]

Congrats.

Your stuff will never get blammed because you're a clock jockey. Grats.

BellClock responds:

If I realise it sucks when I'm sober I promise I'll replace it with a new "good" movie (perhaps)