Keep it up man, you're really putting in the work with all those submission and they keep getting better and better. Glad you used my music! I'll be looking for your stuff in the future!
Keep going, you're on the right track but keep up the practice!!
Smooth out the animation, add sound fx, more content, you'll be well on your way to a substantial madness style animation! :D
Also, thanks for using my music in your flash!!!
Thanks for the review, I feel very honored to have you review my 3 yr old animation. :D I had taken a break from madness 'cuz of what ppl had said about my animation, but when I saw your review I began to practice and try a lot harder, Thank you for inspiring me! :D My newest animations are submitted on a account that was recently hacked, (sadly) Dragonslya. Anyway thank you! :D
Alright here's my take
I'm a big fan of Firth work, and I've followed everything you've done from the beginning. Enjoyed most, some was alright, wasn't too creeped out or impressed by this one, but I feel that might just be a personal numbness to this kind of genre.
Anyways, I noticed many feel this is the man paying homage to the dog for it's sacrifice. And I thought about it for about 5 minutes and though "no not really".
Here's how I interpret it. The abomination at the end (dog body human head and limbs) IS THE DOG. Not at all the human the dog had been leading around during the film.
Here's the reasoning, Dog was smarter than tha man no doubt, but the human had control of the dog and used it for it's own gain, it never did anything for the dog and for the dog to give itself like it did could be seen as meaningful buuutttt thats when you notice that now the abomination can speak and comes from where the dog showed up (little hole in the floor) etc etc, just like the dog, the man couldn't speak and seemed basically inferior to the dog.
You'll notice the dog licking (symbol of animal affection) the tumor as it grows and then in the end it's not thanking the man or paying homage to the dog for giving it's body, it's actually the DOG thanking the TUMOR for making the man donate it's limbs and natural human ability to speak.
Anyways, to make it short, dog played the human, got him to infest himself then conned the man into giving him his superior limbs and head for the dogs greater gain and the dog in the end was loving and thanking of the tumor for allowing for this gain.
That's my opinion. :D
Let me know Mr. Firth
I just like that beat
I know it's an old series I watched a while back too, haven't gained any new insite on it and just think it could over all be better but I just had to say the beat on this one is amazing
Hit the nail on the head.
So terribly honestly true. I don't care how long you've been usin the thing but it never fails to make tracing a pain in the ass from time to time. Wacom should be held accountable for all those exploding heads I'd say. Good work exposing them :D.
lol! don't listen to the haters bro
It took some balls to put this up. Yeah, it's not polished, hell, it's even a little painful to watch, but everyone starts somewhere right??
Ok, first point, learn all the basics first, I'll be glad to show you, as you know, and there are plenty of decent tutorials on this website. Always start with the basics.
Second off, hone your skills a bit. Instead of working with skribbling with the mouse might I suggest learning to manipulate the vectors in flash. It's alot easier for someone starting out, kind of like molding clay, and 9 times out of 10 it's going to look alot more polished. Hell, you've seen how popular you can get with just a vector circle and some tweens :P. (side note, use gradients wisely young one, otherwise it looks like someone puked on the screen).
Finally, don't get frustrated if something doesn't work out or if people come calling your stuff crap. No offense to the people on here, but a good majority have no idea how to do anything well either, except maybe give unconstructive criticism. So, learn, improve and THEN submit.
The 2 is for the potatos and being able to take peoples ill comments gracefully :D. I expect something I can give a 3 or better to next time!!
Thanks that makes me feel a little better. And my potatoes are polished like silver. lol
Now I haven't written one of these in a while, so I will keep it short and to the point. It's good, and I commend you, keep up the good work! HOWEVER!!! I noticed you were using Japanese Kana in the title, and though it created the correct sounds for gun it was using the wrong type of Kana. Now I know this may sound too picky but I'm not doing this because it bothers me, just giving you the heads up. Basically you used Hirigana when you wanted to use Katakana because the word Gun is a foreign word (though the Japanese word for gun is different in itself and blah blah blah). So, just something to consider for your next installment! Good Luck!
Hey Hey king
Hey, I figured I'd check your work out after you threatened to sue me, I replied to your e-mail. I see some similarities but I think they're two very different stories :). I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter.
Hahaha, I was so pleased to see a lost sperm movie where it didn't end up being in someones rectum that I decided to leave you a review. It was short and decently animated. I really enjoyed the voice though. Keep up your work and good luck!
You know what would be a REAL novel idea is to actually have a sperm movie where they're not in a guy's ass. I don't believe that's too much to ask, this horse has been thoroughly and utterly beaten. Other than that, the visuals were done well but the voices left a little to be desired, they needed to be louder. Keep up the work and good luck with that latent homosexuality.
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